Interesting
For starters, Great art work most of the time. Some scenes looked amazing for flash, as did some characters at diffrent points, so all the gether id say that 80% of this flash looked amazing.
However, Im not so sure about this storyline, what i got from this is that there is a research company devoted to studying magic in the future. Well, thats fine and good but how, and why, was this achived? how did they make profits? I found it interesting that the churches wanted the corporation ended, and that bit seemed very realistic. However, sending in a lone assassin made no sense eaither. its the future right? why not simply blow up the building, or rather, give the assain a sniper rifle. ANYTHING other than a one on one duel. The bit with the girls in the car and elixer was weak. Did he not notice the giant knife to her throat, dident he think it odd that she remained in the car when she got there? that scene felt really forced, in a literal and figurative sense, as this is where the art work begins to take a dip.
However, all in all you've made a respectible peice of work here. and this dose deserve front page. Just next time, find a good writer.
oh, and drop the ghetto bullshit. Its the future man!